What’s wrong with this headline?

Well, the headline is a start. Really, the whole story is problematic, and the headline just fuels that problem. The h2 does a better job of storytelling. The h1 just layers on the irony.

Also, one glance at the cumbersome last sentence in this screengrab suggests that minimal copy editing took place.

Regardless, I bet this item will get a lot of hits today.

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